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The breadth of the wind
Gently weaving through the tress

Bending the reeds and grasses
Whispering across waters

Shaping the clouds above
Carrying the birds aloft

Swirling song through space
Time stands still

A peaceful respite
Cool breeze, so quiet

Phillip Hunter Davis

Phillip Hunter Davis

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