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The Endless dancing,
Cascading tears,
The blackest of dresses
And Ruby red heels

The magic moments
that fill the air
As you close your eyes
Breathless sighs

Around you go
On that golden floor
Walls of sparkle
Words forever more

Lights dimmed low
A distant mirror
One reflection
Casted out

Through the window
The cool breeze runs
Across your neck
Breathless sighs

Upon your feet
Ruby red
For if you click them
What's to dread

Away you go

One click
Two click

Around you go
On that golden floor
Walls of sparkle
Words forever more

As you open your eyes
Towards that distant mirror
Still a single reflection
Now standing still

Empty fairy tales
Stories left untold
Left to wonder
How your life will unfold

Kenneth D. Woodard

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