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Boldly and bravely beauty bestowed
Stories so secretly
Remaining untold
Dancing in the distance desires slowly drowning
Faces forgotten helplessly frowning

Relentlessly ranting, raving what's wrong
Streams of silver moonlight
Flowing ever so long
Carelessly causing the tears
That you cry

Willows whispering within the wind
Broken hearts buried
Curiously you bend
Struggling, straggling trying to survive
Wordlessly watching wondering why

Violently voicing velvety skies
Lucidly lashing
Lighting your eyes
Promiscuous pounding pondering sighs
Storms so strongly brewing, finally arise

Frantically fearing forgotten memories
As we say goodbye
Wordlessly watching when you walk away
Distantly daringly bringing through a new day

------
Kenneth D. Woodard


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The following comments are for "Broken Hearts Buried"
by PoeticallyObsessed

imagery
I love the imagery in this poem, it's so cool like a breeze on the night time sky. I don't know. i like it.

( Posted by: thesadpoet [Member] On: March 25, 2007 )





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