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My beliefs got in my head,
Sacrificed myself to Death.
I though there'd be something more,
Not just this pain in my core.
I wish I got more from life,
Instead of sticking the knife
Into my heart, slit my wrists.
Now I know no God exists.
I felt my soul die away,
Radioactive decay.
Now I fall down on my knees,
It's like some type of disease.
No blood runs through these veins, now.
Have I just been disavowed?
What is this: Heaven or Hell?
I am waiting for my angel.

Patience Nicole Vidonic

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by pvidonic

Reminds me of Puppy peeking through the plants. Remember the frown. Congradulations.

( Posted by: PeriwinkleMoses [Member] On: March 19, 2007 )

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