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The walls are closing in
Closing in around me
And no one sees
No one sees me
All the people look
They look right through me
They don't see the pain
The pain so deep in my heart
Why don't they see?
Why won't they help me,
Free me from my prison?
They can't stop it
Can't stop the walls from closing in
Closing in around me

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But only in their dreams can men be truly free. 'Twas always thus, and always thus 'twill be. - Dead Poets Society


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