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Clue number one:
He knocked on my door
Clue number two:
Was the look that he wore

That’s when I knew
It was a pretty good sign
That something was wrong
Up on cloud number nine

Take my hand
It’ll be ok
The weather’s really fine
Up on cloud number

The moon is up
The stars are bright
And everything’s gonna be alright
‘Cuz tonight he will be mine

Up on cloud number nine
He hurt me
Now you’re here
What will come to be?

Well we won’t come down tonight
Cuz the moon is up
And the stars are bright
And everything’s gonna be alright

We can’t go back
But he’s here with me
Tonight we’ll leave the world behind
And spend some time up on cloud number nine

Inspired by:
"Cloud Number Nine"
Bryan Adams

------
Chell
Gimme something to believe in... yea yea



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