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You were never mine to hold
And I was never yours
You say you love me
Why aren't you here with me?

If you want me
Come find me
I'll be right here
So make up your mind

You never called me
Drunk or sober
Why did I even bother?
Am I throwing it all away?

Inspired by:
"Call Me When You're Sober"

Gimme something to believe in... yea yea

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The following comments are for "Letting Go"
by LittleCC88

Letting Go
Nice choice for inspiration. The reference to "drunk or sobar" was my favourite part of the poem actually. I liked this. Thanks for sharing.

( Posted by: silverscent [Member] On: March 10, 2007 )

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