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No one sets me ablaze like you do:
You are all the potassium nitrate,
All the charcoal, all the sulfur,
All the spark needed
To ignite the fire that starts within
And explodes outward
Piercing the heart and
Splintering all hope

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The following comments are for "Black Powder"
by Majnuna

matches, matches, never touch...
love as combustion, passion as a chemical reaction... reading this I saw the brief blue and orange flare burning up the heart like the blackened head of a match... potent imagery. thank you for this.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: March 11, 2007 )

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