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My lips were sealed

then torn from healed

open wide

feed me some lies

here comes the aeroplane

mmm thats fine

here comes the train

but its not true true times

deception leaves an aftertaste

can I spit this out?

No baby swallow it down

cos thats what loves about.

Dirty feeder

Im some poor bleeder

Sock it to me,

go right through me

knock me down

and turn this round

baby taste whats in my mouth

see what its like to feel down

oh now look, whos sorry now?

keep it coming, wheres your train?

pack your guilt now for that plane

wheres your tales to feed me hun?

this smoke, it chokes me, the heat is on.

liar liar can you feel the burn?

your pants on fire as my stomach churns

is this how redemption should be earnt?

are my insides meant to hurt?

should it cause an ache to breathe

Digesting too much, this raw heat

it crushes down hard on my chest

youre now smiling less and less

then you finally drop that fucking spoon

honey whats wrong? youve gone blue

take a breath get back on your seat

dont you know youre what you eat?

I am a misunderstood genius.

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