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For a while now Iíve been looking at the wrong side of the moon
But now I know that the only person I want to be with is you
You need to know the amount of my love is immeasurable
And your beauty surpasses everything that I thought imaginable
Your eyes caught my attention and reeled me in
And I want you to know how much fun itís been

Yeah

You make me strong, you make me weak
You make it really hard for me to speak
You catch my breath, you catch my attention
You catch my heart and you make my erection
You fell from heaven and into my arms
Youíre my angel, my lucky charm

You are so adorable
You are so beautiful
You make me want to continue on with this path
You are perfect for me
You have my empathy
Youíre everything to me, everything to me
Canít you see?

I never thought on that day that we would end up this way
But now that we are I want to continue on
You promise me so many things; I just hope itís worth this pain
Iíll sacrifice everything for you

You are so adorable
You are so beautiful
You make me want to continue on with this path
You are perfect for me
You have my empathy
Youíre everything to me, everything to me
Canít you see?

You are so adorable
You are so beautiful
You make me want to continue on with this path
You are perfect for me
You have my empathy
Youíre everything to me, everything to me
Canít you see?



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The following comments are for "You (My Empathy)"
by XeroKraken

aw
Thats so cute, Itotally love it. Ur such a good writer derek - emily

( Posted by: pavlikogirl [Member] On: March 9, 2007 )





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