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Chapter 1
- Planetary Coalition Date: 7269.950 -
Earth Date: Sometime in the year 2538
Inside Verjace Firja Cantina, within lower docks of the Naxfor System Guild Transitionary Spaceport


“Earth?”
“Earth.”
“Are you sure?”
“No, I made it up. Of course I'm sure.”
“But that's so boring.”
“I didn't name it. You asked, that's it.”
“Well then, why not Planet Air or Waterworld? You need something a bit more catchy.”
“Interestingly enough, three quarters of the planet's surface should be covered with water by now.”
“What? Water? Then why would anybody call it… ? Forget it, forget it. There’s Losorea. Hey Losorea, over here!”
“Hey, Reetli, how are you?”
“Couldn’t be better. This here is my friend Tomalan.”
“Nice to meet you. Say, where are you from? You don’t look like any other biped I’ve seen around these parts.”
“He’s not from around here. He’s from a planet called Dirt.”
“Earth!”
“Whatever. But before we get down to business, tell the story again because I still can’t believe it. Losorea, get comfortable. This story is going to blow your antennas away. Go on Tomalan.”
“Fine, anything for my best informant. It all really started about eight dodecs ago. We were making our approach run on…”

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