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Right now,
We're two angry individuals.
I'm pissed at you;
And you at me.
Why?
We have alot of issues.
One.
You don't think I trust you.
But, I do.
It's just those past incidents that I can't pass through.
Two.
You say that I'm not open towards you.
It's something that I'm not used to.
It's just going to take some time to get adjust to.
Yeah,
We've been together for a year and some days.
Right now,
We are in the doubter's phase.
Old habits die hard.
Anyways,
You say that I'm blocking you.
Pushing you away.
I beg to differ.
But again, I'm just cautious that way.
Pissed off,
You curl up in the sheets.
Faking asleep.
I leave the room silently.
Thinking,
Are we worth it?

------
Erica R. Lindsey aka Windsong [got married in '08]



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