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And this time
As I sit here all alone
I begin
To see what has been stolen
From me

(You)

And your eyes
Caught my attention
And your body
Kept my interest
But then you were falling away, falling away
From me

I don't know how long it's been since that time, that time
You were so into me, you wanted me, wanted me
Now I just can't go on or let go, your in my mind, my mind
Please come back to me, because your falling away, falling away

And so now
The rivers have been growing
From the tears
That I have made to fall off of your face
When you cry
It awakens something inside
Of me

(Demons)

They haunt me
In my dreams and in my light
They remind
Me of a promise of long ago
Now the scar
Is fading with time, passing by

And with time
I can see you leaving me
Please don't go
I don't know if I can go on without you
You don't see
What time is doing to you
You don't know
But your falling away, your falling away

I don't know how long it's been since that time, that time
You were so into me, you wanted me, wanted me
Now I just can't go on or let go, your in my mind, my mind
Please come back to me, because your falling away, falling away

I don't know how long it's been since that time, that time
You were so into me, you wanted me, wanted me
Now I just can't go on or let go, your in my mind, my mind
Please come back to me, because your falling away, falling away

Your falling away, your falling away
(Can't you see)
Your falling away, your falling away
(From me)


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