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It is painful to see these words
Fading with time and trying
To express my sorrow
For I feel myself collapsing
When expectations are not met
When I attempt making nights shorter
When I pray for the things I want

But I call and the lady says
Not yet, you have to wait more
But Iíve waited for so long
Iíve wasted weeks on end
With napping and thinking in the dark

So it pains me to know
To find out the lengths
My patience will go to
It tears me apart slowly
From the very inside
Like unrequited love
And words that only have meaning
To me

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