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Donít dream of me

My soul cannot handle the weight of your uncertainty
When you close your eyes, my heart will bleed
I canít catch my breath and my mind will speed

Donít dream of me

When you lay unaware in the depths of your mind
Your unconscious world will slowly creep into mine
I will desire to search but still, you I wonít find

Donít dream of me

To you itís just sleeping, but could this be my fate?
To feel all the energy that you create?
This is my reality but you will just wake

So please, donít dream of me



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by Meghanflower

wow
Wow,
This is great.
I like it :).
Thanks for this.

( Posted by: MaleOrderedNurse [Member] On: February 24, 2007 )





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