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When I last said goodnight to you
You pinned your kisses to me
Like military decorations

Your smile saluted stiffly while
Your war horse soul
Soldiered doggedly on

When I last said goodnight you spoke
With clipped conscripted diction
No more freeborn sweet nothings
‘Cause careless talk costs lives

Rank and file dogsbodies we
Were beautiful to each other once
And now our hearts march endlessly,
Our bed succumbs to marshal law

Our love manoeuvres now
Kiss by countermanded kiss
Guerrilla tactics guide
Our hands through night’s hostilities
And guard our private thoughts to keep
What little pride we can

We become impassioned predators
Lost in pressing patterns of
Advance and then retreat across
Flesh’s disputed territory-

Sex is a scheme of sabotage
Conversation is witless attrition

-Rank and file dogsbodies we
Were lovely to each other once
We were soft-hearted civilians then
These days we manufacture
Caresses like munitions

What happened to us?

If not at peace, we used to be
Comrades in arms at least, but now
To touch is to stage a coup and to
Say I love you is an act
Of bloody insurrection

What happened to us?

By what processes did I become
Militant
And you, mercenary?

Did we forget or were we caught
In compassion’s endless cross-fire?

When I last said goodnight to you
I wrapped my words in the white flag my
Tongue had long since become and I
Surrendered sadly

You and I both know
We’ll carry our words like shrapnel
Our hearts like holy medals
Fastened on to what's left of
Our veterans’ lapels…


------
The human race, the only race I know where everybody loses.


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The following comments are for "Rules of engagement"
by AuldMiseryGuts

Shannon
This is heart felt and the saddnes of this
of lovers who at one time had a paasionate love
and now they just exsist with one another. Another one very well done as always. Thanks for this.

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: February 23, 2007 )

"Rules of Engagement"
An emotionally moving piece and superbly written poem. You should receive "The Medal of honor" and with "Great Distinction" for dealing with a "Love Lost Paradise" life situation. Your creative juices are flowing very well with this work of art. You have emerged victorious from the battlefields of a relationship. God bless and keep shining bright!

( Posted by: FireFly747 [Member] On: February 25, 2007 )

..
Extremely well written. I've shared this bed and this so eloquently describes it.

You were spot on to compare a breaking (or broken) relationship with a militant outlook - it becomes a duty to be with the person. As always, very apt and very real.

( Posted by: chinadoll [Member] On: February 25, 2007 )

thanking three- no, four- people
thank you all who checked this out. only connect, you know? ... thanks too, to the soldier of misfortune without whom this couldn't have been written.

Armistice?

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: March 1, 2007 )





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