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I'm on the outside looking in.
Thinking of how my life could of been.
Filled with bitterness, hatred, and drama.
Struggling as I try to help my mama.
But, life goes on.
There's no stopping time for me.

I'm on the outside looking in.
Sharing my life with my boyfriend.
We have our ups and downs like every couple do.
Sometimes I wonder, if we'll ever make it through.
But, life goes on.
Some things aren't just meant to be.

I'm on the outside looking in.
Visualizing the shape the world is in.
People hating one another.
The killing of each other.
Sadly, life goes on.
We, humans, are the key of destruction.

------
Erica R. Lindsey aka Windsong [got married in '08]



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