Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
0.00

(0 votes)

You must login to vote

There's a guy that I know;
He's smitten with this girl.
They have a lot in common;
From musics, clothes, and things to do.
Every time he sees her;
His heart beats faster,
His face blushes red,
And things around him ceases to exist.

There's a girl that I know;
She's always full of life.
There's always something she likes to do;
Things that amuses her quite easily.
She lives life to the fullest;
By going on crazy adventures,
Doing things she would have never done,
Nothing could stop her fun.

The only difference is;
That guy is my boyfriend.
And that girl isn't me.

------
Erica R. Lindsey aka Windsong [got married in '08]



Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Two Sides to a Story"
by Windsong

the ending was
such a suprise. i enjoyed your poem. i'll be looking for more of your posts.

john. john doe.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: February 20, 2007 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: