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My Love:

I love you and I want you to know
Where ever you are, thats where i'll go
I'd give you my heart and sholder to cry
I'll love you until the day that I die

I'd go through rocks, hills, valleys and streams
If I knew that i'd see you every night in my dreams
With a heart full of love, and a powerful mind
The two of us together are one of a kind

With the words from our song, "My Angel" you are
I want you to know theres "No Place That Far"
Do you love me as you tell me you do
Is the love that you feel, a love that is true

If I give you my heart will you give me yours
Our love it will work once we open some doors
With love in your heart you'll fly like a dove
I want you to know that I Love You My Love

Christian Rodgers 2007




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by Sunset

lyrical
Christian :)

Lyrical and lovely. The beginnings of a fine song...and the finest kind of tribute to a love.

Not complicated or particularly intricate in its construction, but nonetheless, a lovely sentiment which will reach the forests of "No Place That Far". :)

JC






( Posted by: jenwith [Member] On: February 20, 2007 )

Justified Imagery
I was compelled to read this poem because it boasts the same title as my favorite song by my favorite singer, Justin Timberlake. I must commend you for what you have written because it is lyrical yet truly poetic and conveys an image and creatively illustrates true love like Justin Timberlake's music does. A very nice work indeed!

-ArsPoet2789ica

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: February 20, 2007 )





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