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You are so pathetic,
And you think youíre poetic!
You go around saying lies,
Then youíre the one who comes back and cries.
You think youíre so perfect,
But honey, youíre not worth it.
You should go curl up and die,
And please, donít assume Iíll cry.
I donít even think you get the point,
You canít even connect a joint.
What do you really think your worth?
Since your pathetic, useless birth.
Maybe Iím being too mean,
But then again, you say youíre clean.
Well Iím not going to waste my life on you,
I have found someone new.
Someone who sees the fact that Iíve worked so hard in life,
That appreciates me, and doesnít want to end it with a knife.
Someone who admires the fact that I can speak four languages,
And takes me to places, countries, towns, and villages.
So donít say I lost out,
Because, trust me I have no doubt.
About how much your life must suck right now.

So Iím going to stop wasting my time on you,
And, believe me, Iíve thought this threw.

Leave me alone,
Or donít.

I really donít care,
Because Iíve found someone new,
Better and smarter then you.

I have worked so hard my whole life,
And Iíve been threw so much crap.
Now look at me,

Iím all grown up.



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The following comments are for "All grown up"
by MaleOrderedNurse

wow
What a rant! Something we should all do from time to time. There is a difference in a work of art and a slice of life. You made the slice perfectly, art be damned, but still a read with which many can indentify.

JC

( Posted by: jenwith [Member] On: February 20, 2007 )

Thanks
Thanks :),

( Posted by: MaleOrderedNurse [Member] On: February 21, 2007 )

DAMN
Wow. Your just a wee bit pissed off. I like it. We all feel like that sometimes. I know I do at least.

( Posted by: thesadpoet [Member] On: February 25, 2007 )





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