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Here I am, all alone
selfishness, divided us
Now I know, I'm not alive
because when you left
I upped and died
I used to feel your presence here
but now I'm left with hopelessness and fear
fear of what is and what could be
but without you here, it's gonna be
like nothing I've dealt with before
and I think I might just fall to the floor
because your gone, your not here.
I think my life just passed me by
because I heard you just went and upped and died
becasuse I went and broke your heart
now I know we are apart forever and for always
you have left my side, but now I feel so free
knowing you are happy


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The following comments are for "Knowing You Are Happy"
by tjmack554

wow...
now this poem is so down and blue...it's almost purple. good-old-gut-busting-writing-down-to-the bone.

in other words, i liked it.

john.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: February 13, 2007 )





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