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I shall never be more honored than to be your knight in tarnished armor. My armorís sheen is dulled by years and deeds perhaps best untold. I have battled dragons of doubt and despair, as well as the tempestuous demons of debauchery.



As an errant knight, or perhaps a mere knave of the unround table, I lay my crude and imperfect sword at your feet in a desperate attempt to win my fair ladyís loving heart.



In the tradition of Saint Valentine, I would sacrifice everything that I hold dear to me, save for my love for you.



Happy Saint Valentines Day,
my darling loving bride.



With everlasting love,
Your groom, Steve.


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"A foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of little minds, adored by little statesman and philosophers and divines. With consistency a great soul has simply nothing to do."

- Ralph 'Where's Waldo' Emerson




"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like. And I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve."
- Bilbo Baggins













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The following comments are for "Valentine to my Bride '07"
by drsoos

Valentine to my Bride
Heart felt this one is. Well written. Thanks for this

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: February 11, 2007 )

Poetic kisses for a missus
kind of the poetic equivalent to giving the one you love a goofy smile, a heart-felt hug and a sloppy kissÖ

thatís a good thing. Sweet.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: February 12, 2007 )

cool poem.
i'm still smiling from reading it.

j.jd.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: February 13, 2007 )

brides and grooms
Ooooh! I am such a sap, but this is wonderful! I love it!

( Posted by: snuffystuff [Member] On: August 24, 2008 )





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