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Dashing, crashing, bumping, zooming, onward upward going moving.

Through the aisles, doubt of decision, gift of desire, perfect precision.

Yelling, screaming, pushing, shoving, color of red flashing, blinking.

Ripping of hair, scratching of check, fights that happen all this week.

Sitting, forgetting, sipping, slurping, men not shopping til too late.

Testy, messy, frazzled, bedazzled, shoppers battle for the last treat.

Thoughts of Christmas, time of remembrance, lost among the hassle of late.

Wishing you a strss-free Christmas!

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