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Love is this breath between us, this life, mercy.
Take me my love to your mountain top,
Grasp my hand of remorse
This is your muse of destiny’s course
Play my gentle chords of purity
Love my every step as I yours
Paint me with your tears of joy
Be my Valentine or my Valentino
Alas! I am but a subject to your command!

------
Cynthia R. Yildirim

*~Love is the hidden element~*

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The following comments are for "Valentine's Muse"
by LovesEssence

Valentine's Muse
This was a cute one. I enjoyed reading this one.

Love,
Kimberly

( Posted by: literature [Member] On: February 10, 2007 )





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