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So you think you can capture an Angel
clip her wings close and tight
and bring her to submission
plucked from free and fancy flight

So you think you can hold an Angel
so tight that she can not breathe
make her gasp for her freedom
her life, she will surely grieve.

So you think you can subdue an Angel
keep her locked up in a cage
to bring a chill to her wings
and bound her on center stage

I warn you now against such thoughts
for she will surely find a way
to break free of those binds
and alone, there, you shall humbly lay.

ARenee
January 25, 2006




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