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(My rendition of an Eintou words/syllables...2-4-6-8-6-4-2)

Love found
on internet
a mixture of flirting
teased with cyber words of delight
blush brought back to old cheeks
connection fails
Love lost




------
Kacee Huggs


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The following comments are for "Found and Lost"
by Nitz Kitty

connection fails
sad, funny, true... all the qualities I've come to expect from your poetry Kacee... though actually, there are times when I reckon those “connection timed out”, “disconnected” messages would be a Godsend in real life… where Some connections don't fail soon enough!

Eintou thread, anyone?

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: February 7, 2007 )

found and lost
Just when I thought my muse had left for good, I found this different kind of poetry style on a friend's site and it jumped out at me...Shannon to tell you the truth...after it was over ...I kind of breathed a sigh of relief...Thanks so much for your comments...you have always been so kind...and I'm all for a thread if anyone wants to try this style...It is suppose to go full circle...love- hate...lost - found... life- death...like that...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: February 7, 2007 )

Found and Lost
Kacee
another great muse and I agree with Shannon. Thanks

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: February 7, 2007 )

Found and lost
Wanda,
Thank you to an ever faithful commenter ...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: February 7, 2007 )

Chris
WOW! Chris ,
Thanks....Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: February 10, 2007 )

Internet Whirlpool
Oh, cyberspace!
The swirling vortex of both ends of infinity,
where one can get lost in time
or find long-buried treasure...

-Aubri

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: February 19, 2007 )

found and lost
Aubri,
Oh how true...thanks for your comment...it is much appreciated...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: February 19, 2007 )

love lost
'connection fails/love lost'; you have beautifully summed up the new culture of relationships, Kacee.
R K

( Posted by: R.K.Singh [Member] On: March 5, 2007 )

Found/Lost
R.K.S. Thank you so much for your kind comment on my poem...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: March 8, 2007 )

Stinky fish
Eric...thanks for the poetic comment...but a dead fish is a dead fish ...it stinks and I'd gladly give it away...

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: March 29, 2007 )





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