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In the shadowed back alley
They feast upon the under belly
Screams delight the demon faeries
When innocence and grief are married

Whilst dullard preachers from mountaintops beseech
Deaf multitudes words can never reach
To heed the nature of your sins
Beware the demon faeries lie within

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The following comments are for "The nature of the Beast"
by JackGrady

what i like about this, or one of the things i like about this, was how it was sort of limmerickal, but very dark.
most definately a marriage of innocence and grief!

( Posted by: ruina [Member] On: February 6, 2007 )

The nature of the Beast
dark, dramatic, gothic, yet lyrical too. enjoyed.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: February 7, 2007 )

Runia, Bob and Shannon, Thanks for your positive comments. They are truly appreciated.

( Posted by: JackGrady [Member] On: February 8, 2007 )

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