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I hate you.
And with the same spice, I love you.
I entered the kitchen to rid my memory of you;
but after the fire of separation
I returned completely cooked!

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The following comments are for "Fire of Separation"
by Majnuna

completely cooked!
Majnuna, genuine pleasure to see a post from you again, it's been much too much too long.

Enjoyed the cadence (and the idea) of returning "completely cooked" and the idea of the heart/soul spiced and spit-roasted by separation. Itís a powerful image, full of intense heat. You excel in finding the image that will convey the emotion. Thank you for this.


( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: February 6, 2007 )

Never Gone...
There are those people who are unforgettable, whether they bring good memories or bad. The ones who bring good memories just cannot be shaken off your soul, and one misses them so, yet memories have their way of walking back into real life. An excellent metaphor to bring about the image, Majnuna!


( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: February 12, 2007 )

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