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might warrior woman
heart on your sleeve, sword in your
hand. i see you're broken shield,
see your body in tact.
tears in your eyes, but still
you blossum. empty inside
but your blood pumps to heal you.

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someday could be today...





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The following comments are for "nnej"
by ruina

nnej
there's dignity and a powerful stoicism to the poem's warrior woman... written with understanding and empathy, this. genuinely moving. thanks for sharing.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: February 8, 2007 )

no, no Shannon, thank you!
well, that was what i was going for in the poem... and empathy is what i feel with the person i wrote it for.
glad you enjoyed!
-arwyn

( Posted by: ruina [Member] On: February 8, 2007 )





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