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Tina capricorn, you're swimming.
i saw you on stage
eyes met
instant friendship. took your picture
and showed you- comanding mermaid-
to everyone.
now, longing to see
your green eyes blossum,
your minneapolis heart.

someday could be today...

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by ruina

tina capricorn
strangely sweet and touching this... expectant and affectionate. beautiful, this.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: February 7, 2007 )

approach. simply vivid.


( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: February 9, 2007 )

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