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Talking and talking
bitching and moaning
but havenít said a thing.
Pointing out flaws,
problems and issues.
But with no solution
to back the bitter distaste.

I want to be the one
who fixes the broken,
cures the sick,
helps the weak.
But like a small child
lost in a world
too big for me
Iíve nothing to say.

So Iíll do the same.
Talk, bitch and moan.
The world will move on.
Time will go by.
My routine will stay true.
Always trying to preach
with no audience in sight.


The following comments are for "Nameless, Faceless Poet"
by JasonR66

cool poem says it like it is for almost everyone

( Posted by: FranFair [Member] On: February 10, 2007 )

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