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When we firts began this journey
We were both in a hurry
To figure out each other's dreams

But then things happened
And then you were saddened
And I wondered if we could truly be

So then things were resolved
Since the last time you called
But im still tortured by the memories

These memories that torture me so
Are not even mine, but yours
But they are residing inside of me

I suffer through just for you
But I wonder what you would do if you knew
The things that I want you to see

The sun is falling and the moon is rising
I just hope that you're not crying
Cuz I love you baby

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The following comments are for "Memories (poem)"
by XeroKraken

Thats agood one. I like it. I hope u like what i posted 4 u as a poem!!

( Posted by: pavlikogirl [Member] On: February 2, 2007 )

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