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Will I ever be able
to say anything?
Am I a mannequin
with my heart on my sleeve?
To you I am voiceless,
an object to you..
an organized accident,
a mind misconstrued.
Will I accept
your offering?
Do I look childish?
Do I look naive?
I have a heart..
I swear that I do.
But to you I'm a mannequin.
I'm nothing to you.

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