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Repressed memories
Seeing you
Repressed memories
Missing you
Repressed memories
Crying when you almost died
Repressed memories
Trying to tape back together the pieces of my heart
Repressed memories
Hating the grenn Cheevy truck you drive
Repressed memories
Hating the way you used to make me laugh
Repressed memories
Hating the log-cabin traileryou live in
Repressed memories
Making me insane
Repressed memories
You promised me the moon
Repressed memories
Debt to be paid
Repressed memories
Yet with this said I can't hate you
Repessed memories
It is not in my nature
Repressed memories


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The following comments are for "Repressed Memories"
by forsakengurl

The repeating words, I keep stumbling on them. I feel that it would be stronger if you repeated Repressed instead of Repressed Memories.
But the poem is self-explanatory, and it's reminiscent of 10 Things I hate about you.

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: January 27, 2007 )

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