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Out in the open you gaze leaveing the space within limits
wandering eyes make wandering thoughts
amid wondering stares you wonder a muck
the werid the peculiar do little more than invite, the placid personatlities of conformity look as they might bite.
wall up your interest and blank up your face. later there is time to relook in your own space.


Mohawk gleaming in gels glassy light, flash of metal stud lodged in pink tongue, blinks at me as you spew words of hate glory and madness.
Eyes that tell more than reputation allows, you know i know and thats all i can tell, the hate masks the love, the glory, your failure, and the madness masks your humanity you try to surpress. Yet i digress. From the start, you are half the part, in which i speak, not only bout you, but truly you do.

You take bumps and falls concealing its mark, the true sign is the throb of your heart. do drugs, have sex, waste your smarts, you come off complex, but Inside your simple and plain. you wish for a morow with something to gain, take a chance on you, pull through.


same feelings woven through all, the basket is deep wide and thorough, catching the pain seekers, pain inflicters, and pain itself. it holds us prisoners of a beating heart of one. no one can escape it.

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