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joe fits so nicely in a box
his beard has gone all gray
he died while chopping greens
didn't know he'd caught the pox
we didn't even know he'd been away

he'd always been in such control
(slumped upon the escarole)
joe would say he'd bet us
(ironic now, amongst the lettuce)
that when he went, he'd go his own damn way

oh, the things that we go through
(he'd just crumbled up the tofu)
when we have to write another dreary ballad
the man joe might have been
what was his last name again?
oh, who gives a fuck, just pass the goddam salad


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J


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The following comments are for "salad"
by mercer102

Salad
A little extra flavor in the salad...that Joe...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: January 27, 2007 )





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