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Troubled minds…
A fearful fright…
Inspired words,
I write,
Thanks to ye
Faces in the haze
Bothered by the thought of future
Baffled by the sense of present
In complete turmoil with your wants and needs
Searching for a sense of being
Requiring a sense of direction

The troubles of the mind are overwhelming
Seeming impossible to overcome
Leaving no light in sight

Nevertheless storms come and go
So be as it may a bit gray
You shall emerge reborn
With a clearer sight
A wiser mind
Realizing your own path in life



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