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[A wee short one]

When I am sad I feel the wings
When I am tearful I take the run
When I am dreaming my feathers fly
‘Tis only then I am truly free
My symbol of joy that touches the sky
Caressing the clouds which I have made mine




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C.lynagh


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The following comments are for "FLIGHT"
by C.Lynagh

flight
i like your imagery. the shortness wasn't a problem at all. i used to not like short poems, but now i started using my mind more to short poems and it just makes better. i really enjoyed yours though. it painted a beautiful picture in my mind, for some reason. take care, xo.

( Posted by: Veruca Salt [Member] On: December 20, 2002 )

Short but sweet
Perhaps too short to have too much to comment on, but pretty imagery all the same. Freedom in flight. Nice idea.

( Posted by: False Dawn [Member] On: July 20, 2003 )





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