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Amazingly silenced
by mocha skin
she tests my inability of restraint.

Music connects our soul
Loosen up baby
Wrap your body in mine, were one in rhythm.

Obsessions altered
by chocolate covered skittles
provoke me, Ill bite again and again.

Vermilion waves
highlight those eyes,
One look and I flow with the curve of your body and mind.

Catlike and smooth, oh those leopard moves,
hunt Im captured,
devoured by your frenzied feast.

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I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler


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by nae411

Nae
You are just too HOT ...I'm gonna need a Mocha shake to cool off...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: January 19, 2007 )

Mocha
it's the selection and arrangement of seductive words and phrases that prick at and provoke senses and mind. skillfully sensual, not so much sizzling as mealting and dripping... savoured is best...

...now in need of cold shower ;)

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: January 19, 2007 )

Mocha
LOL, Kacee, Mocha is so delicious!

Thank you Lucie. I miss writing. Trying to get back into the groove of it.

AuldMiseryGuts, you made my day! Enjoy the shower!

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: January 22, 2007 )

Sizzling Nae!
Now that's the old Nae, we all know and love!
We've missed you.

Love ya
Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: January 23, 2007 )

Wonderous Nae
This is delicious art, tempting my dream morsels to dream like this again.

You need to write more. That special love you feel and have.....go with it and go girl!!

Glad to see your beauty again, shedding that skin. xo

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: October 6, 2008 )





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