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Our time apart makes me see
How much I love thee
Hours gone, by and by
So many times, I have made you cry
And yet you see the real me
And the man I was meant to be

Troubles in the past have made you strong today
But I wish I could have helped you out in some way
You make me happy, you make me sad
About all the times that have gone bad
You make me strong, you make me weak
With all the memories Iíve been made to keep

But all in all, itís just the same
My love for you and how it came
You opened up my door.
You shined a light down my path
I couldnít ask for more
Than what I already have

But can you do me one thing
Oh, the relief it would bring
Can you make what used to be so important to you?
Less important than me
That is all I want you to do
And if you did, I would be free

Iíve been worried for a while
About if I can see your smile
I feel like Iím losing you
Oh please, donít let that be true
I want to hold on as long as I can
But I fear weíre nearing the end

Help me and Iíll help you
So that we can stay, forever true
I love you with all my heart
And it would kill me if we were apart
I hope to see you another day
Iím sorry that Iím this way

If you do this one thing for me
I would have no troubles staying with thee
I could never tell you this, face to face
Because I fear the pain it would place
But I know Iíll have to someday
Please babe, let us stay



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The following comments are for "Emily"
by XeroKraken

aww
derek thats such a sweet poem. Not even kidding. I loved it. I have to make u a poem and then we'll be even. seriously. lol i love you.

( Posted by: pavlikogirl [Member] On: January 19, 2007 )





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