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I know Love

Every journey begins with a kiss
I glance at her wave and already I miss
That love and beholding
The strength and the warmth
Her presence of spirit
Her brilliant, ferocious radiant love
I could stop my car right now, kneel down by the roadside
To thank the Lord up above

My friends see me smitten
How hard I was once was
Great leaps I have striven
Mighty fortresses crossed
No longer I battle Iím trapped in her grace
My heart re-enforced by the love I embrace
To them I seem poorer but thatís not the case

Iíve figured out life
I didnít think that I would
Itís not about power or wealth
Itís about knowing what is decent
What is right for you and for others
Itís about knowing your heart
Feeling good from the start
Awareness of fairness
Knowing love when itís given
Loving your children and loving your wife
Knowing that youíre loved back
Loving your life


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