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A legacy replayed on faded film:

It starts off...BANG!
A burst of life,
And we’re pulled into this world.

We study...rehearse to learn our lines,
Taking time to make this work,
Seem worth the while.


What happens if the reel runs out?
When there’s no one around to change it?
Will it just end or start again?

Maybe the answer's in the credits…
Shown only after everyone has gone,
Except it’s all over then.

I the end, we don’t shut down,
Or disappear behind closed curtains.
Instead, walk away…into a great wide landscape.

If you could choose a different one...
What movie would you be?

Adam J. Dutcher

I am...

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The following comments are for "Movies"
by AdFunk

Life! Cameras! Action!
We are all born with the screenplays of our lives
It's up to us to produce the movie

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: April 7, 2012 )

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