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We raise our fists
And shake them proudly
We whisper in each otherís ears:
Revolution! Revolution!
But when, beautiful sisters,
And aching brothers,
Will we find the strength,
To raise our voices,
Shout it to the clouds
So all the stars
And gods may hear?

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