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Anger burns within
my skin conceals
what my bleeding
soul feels

Crimson clouds my
vision an
evil mission
forms in my being;
Remorse and love
fly fleeing
to the untainted
and sainted
soul sitting silently...

I was Jeckle,
now I'm Hyde;
may God save you
should We collide
You will never
heal what I saw
You sever;
I would never
allow you to
after what you
put me through

do not lure
me in,
don't goad me to fight;
your sweet abscence
is my soul's
delight;
i will never
let you win.

------
"You have lied to me, my dear Morpheous, and I have ended our little game; I wonder if I fear the truth more than your lies?"
-TRA


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The following comments are for "Grudge (Let the Bridges Burn)"
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drug?
Well, I actually quite liked this one. It's got a certain something. The rhythm is really unusual; I get the churning turmoil but also the focus - like steam blasting at intervals from an engine.
The only thing that I didn't get was the use of the word "drug"? I'm guessing you meant "dragged", but drug fitted the rhythm better? I'm not sure it really works, though - it conjures up images of addicts and dealers, but that doesn't really fit with the rest of the peice.
But other than that, I liked it. Keep up the good work. :)

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: December 19, 2002 )

taken
youve taken my interest. i liked your spacing and emphasis on each word gave you the feeling of thoughts.

( Posted by: krazeekookie [Member] On: December 19, 2002 )

grudge
i liked the way there was a different style to each line, but it still focused on the same theme. the title really caught me too. i like your poem alot. take care, xo.

( Posted by: Veruca Salt [Member] On: December 20, 2002 )

grudge
I liked this poem a great deal. It very much struck a chord with me, as I too am dealing with a lot of pent up hostilities due to grudges that i would like to act on...yet do not want to lower myself to the grudgees level. I like your other poems too, and i too am a follower of the rainbow so i can really relate.
take care fellow dreamer! :-)

( Posted by: CJHerlihy [Member] On: July 1, 2004 )





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