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I selfishly
Want to touch your skin
Hold you in my gaze
And feel you within,
Experience your being,
Flesh mixed with soul,
Strip away everything,
So I become whole.

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by Kambriel

not sure yet whether the raw honesty of this redeems the selfishness? often felt, (and sometimes wrote), that love is as much driven by ego and ignorance as any other human instinct but does that necessarily make it less real? A lot to ponder in those pithy eight lines, for me at least. For getting me thinking, thanks.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: January 14, 2007 )

I think everyone is some what selfish when it comes to feelings for someone else. I have to agree with Shannon this does make one think. Thanks

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: January 14, 2007 )

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