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My halo has tilted
Enlightened my eyes
Iím no longer human
In righteous disguise
Rather I am human
Who rightly sees
My brothers and sisters
As I now see me
Imperfect wonder
Beautiful shine
Smiles from a soul
Walking a tight line
A faint cry from the empty
Balances out what is filled
Life whirlwinds can knock me
Though my spirit is still
My halo has tilted
Enlightened my eyes
Iím no longer human
In righteous disguise



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The following comments are for "Cracked"
by innarae

Cracked
realising that in/ from our imperfect, fallible humanity we have our greatest gift and draw our greatest strength... Like the soul's own statement of intent, uncompromised and alive. Thank you for the clarity of this.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: January 7, 2007 )

thank you
...again for taking time with this...what a freedom comes when we all forsake the inner sense of property...of personal right to standards no human can consistently uphold. and what respect we develop for each other in this process. thanks again...

( Posted by: innarae [Member] On: December 29, 2007 )





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