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Watch it now, your world is shaking
Decisions to be made
Look inside, your core is breaking
Old visions, they will fade

Time to deal with what youíve been facing
Time to make a change
Think of love and what youíre embracing
Wonít seem to you so strange

Break away from your stubborn statue
Chip away until youíre free
If the memories try to catch you
Go on and let them see

That you are not the same
No prisoner to their game
Theyíll retreat peacefully
And let you be

Rest assured, with your instinct failing
Itís just proof that youíve grown
Close your eyes, hold on to the railing
Through everything unknown

Nothing scares like raw emotion
Trying to take control
Relax and let all the commotion
Settle in your soul

So donít ever forget
Your second chance is set
Consider this to be
Your next step

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The following comments are for "next step"
by Jewlicious

Really nice
It is really nice. I an an amature so I do not dare to grade but this is really good.

( Posted by: odimassi [Member] On: April 13, 2007 )

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