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The spirit of spring
the marriage of souls
love's magic moments
the mystery unfolds

Seeing with awe
through child-like eyes
wide open to presence
enthralled by surprise

Awakening to beauty
from such a deep sleep
the long winter's over
there's spring-time to reap

Eyes beaming brightly
a heart like the sun
warming all new life
there's growth to be done

Each moment is joyful
the voices they sing
like birds in the treetops
'tis the spirit of spring

Love and light

Humility is rare because to have it you have to want nothing, yet when you have it you get everything.

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