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I live in Summer County
not far from Fall and Spring
Winter County's down the road
in land of Hearts-Do-Sing

Summer County's golden sun
it shines on flowers wild
with green grass swaying in the breeze
the place to be a child

Fall's the place to chase the leaves
in coats of many colours
the land a bed of honey gold
and red and brown and others

Winter County's pristine white
or sometimes dull and grey
nights are long and days are short
the place for inner play

Spring's the place where new life grows
in shining light of love
young faces smile in joyful glee
in praise of God above

The state of many Seasons
in the land of Hearts-Do-Sing
where Summer County is my home
and bells forever ring

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Love and light
Elizabeth

Humility is rare because to have it you have to want nothing, yet when you have it you get everything.


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The following comments are for "SUMMER COUNTY"
by ElizabethAFeisst

Summer...
I can definately see this place. It's very beautiful. It makes me miss the summer more than ever. It's an interesting contrast to jonjondoe's crossing Colorado

( Posted by: thesadpoet [Member] On: January 11, 2007 )

Thank you
...for your observations and comments on this poem... most appreciated Sad..

Love and light
Elizabeth

( Posted by: ElizabethAFeisst [Member] On: January 11, 2007 )





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