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It's Christmas eve,
And I'm all alone.
No one around,
My heart slowly turning to stone.

It's Christmas eve,
for crying out loud!
So why am I here,
My spirit under a dark cloud?

Because I have left
My one true love.
Pushed it away,
Heck I gave it a shove!

And now after years,
Of not knowing him more,
I sit here and wonder,
Will he still love me, still adore?

So How do I move
and reach out again?
get back in his graces
and stop my life of sin?

If you know the answer
You have a plan
Tell me quick
For I'm a desperate man!








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